Escape from the Island - another student story...

This is another post showcasing the writing talents of my students, and is by Aahil... He could smell a burning scent at the back of the plane and then heard a loud bang behind a toilet door but before long the plane was airborne. He thought maybe that he was hallucinating so he asked a stewardess for some water but as soon as he asked, harsh unexpected turbulence hit. Anyone standing was slammed onto the top of the cabin. Crash! The stewardess was propelled down the aisle. Boom! The airplane plunged into the azure, blue ocean. He felt like he was a condemned man on his route to the electric chair . Alfred grabbed his lifejacket and jumped out of exit row door .He lept into the deep,volume of water. It felt like a thousand knives stabbing into you, as he jumped straight into the left side of the wing. Slowly but steadily his pain started to ease although still there was an ache in his hip. In the distance, he saw a small fragment of land ,so he tore a piece of th...