Another Great Student Story!

by Michael Hartland

THIS IS ANOTHER student story, this time by Aahil.  We used the well-known poem 'Jabberwocky' by Lewis Carroll as the starting point. I then applied teaching from my ebooks to help Aahil improve the variety of sentence types he was using and to improve his characterisation and description.

You can find out more about how I help students develop their writing in my ebook But I'm No Good At Creative Writing! here , and in my other guides, The Five Sentence Type Workbook here and A Dash of Punctuation here.

The lush green jungle riddled with trees smelt like sap and bear honey. It was filled with velvet moss and when the birds cried they sounded like a choir singing in harmony together...

You can read the full story here.

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